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Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Path to Manhood (excerpt)

I am the winner of the May Camelot short story contest held in Linkedin's Writers 750 group. Here is an excerpt:

Path to Manhood

By Glenda Reynolds

After Tristin’s run-in with Delrot the Mongrelfolk, Hamel gave serious thought in preparing his son for what he may face in the future. No son of his should ever be afraid to venture alone within their village of Rootspire, let alone Willow Forest which had become his playground. Now that Tristin had turned eight years old, Hamel decided to spend extra time with his son. He began teaching him what manhood was all about. He instilled in Tristin the four most important things to aspire to do on the path to becoming a man: live pure, speak truth, right the wrongs, and honor the king.
Hamel set aside a day each week when he and Tristin would go out in the wilderness together. They would sleep out in the open and hunt with a bow and arrow. Tristin learned survival techniques. Though he didn’t want to, Hamel taught Tristin to fight with a knife. Tristin became quite good at it, so much so that Hamel stifled a laugh to see his son crouched, ready to defend himself. He was so adorable. Hamel and Tristin began to bond like never before during their outings together.
It was King’s Day in honor of King Arthur of neighboring Camelot. The village of Rootspire was a mass of curiosity seekers who had come to see the out of town players and vendors. There were puppeteers, “Cure All” medicine vendors, trinkets for the ladies, leather goods for the men folk, fresh baked goods, and last of all, some knights of the Round Table sword fighting for the onlookers. One of the knights took his helmet off as he addressed the crowd. He had wavy blonde hair with a rugged yet handsome face.
“Can we have a volunteer? Is there anyone in the humble village of Rootspire who can best me?” asked Eric the knight.
“Go on Papa,” said Tristin. “I know that you can fight pretty well. Show ‘em what you’ve got!”
Not wanting to appear cowardly in front of his son, Hamel agreed. He stepped forward and said, “You have one here.”
“Okay, looks like we have our volunteer. What’s your name, sir?”
“Hamel.”
“Farmer Hamel has agreed to take me on. Let’s hear it for Hamel.” The town’s people applauded him. The second knight, Gerard, placed chainmaille and a helmet on Hamel; the young farmer tried acquainting himself with the heavy sword.
The two men stood facing each other as Gerard yelled, “Begin!”
Eric and Hamel advanced to the center as the sound of clashing steel filled the air. Eric was holding back to see what kind of moves Hamel was capable of. In doing so, Eric’s feet were kicked out from under him. He found himself looking up at Hamel who was hovering above him with his sword point-blank in Eric’s face. The crowd zealously applauded. Not to be outdone, Eric whipped the sword out of his face with his own as he rolled to right himself. Eric decided to make an example of the lowly farmer. His attacks were so swift and accurate. By the time it was over, Hamel was lying on the ground; his sword was kicked out of reach. He was just glad to have survived the ordeal.

“Do you yield?” asked Eric.

(to be continued...)


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